Ocean

He was like the ocean.

I had too much of him, so much that I could drown into him.

But not even one drop of him could save me, couldn’t salvage me for the good of me.

So I let go.

An escape.

– the incomplete verse

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11 thoughts on “Ocean

  1. I love the way this is structured

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  2. i love this and would definitely enjoy the complete version!

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  3. I love how it’s developing more curiosity… the dialogue balance is great!

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      1. You’re welcome

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  4. I love your writing vibe, it is giving me life πŸ™‚

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